I was captivated with your choice of the new season of THE OFFICE, since I am a big fan of the television series as well. I was intrigued with many of the changes made in the new series that you listed. But some parts of the article lacked certain details pertaining to the examples you exemplified. Although I was able to understand some of the grammatical errors made, a couple more revisions of your article could have prevented this. The visuals that were presented in your piece were ideal in introducing the new characters. Overall, the background information and episode description was well written.
The premier summary gave us a lot of information about the show. Good explanation about all the changes made in the new season,gave us a heads up before we watch it. The pictures used were good because there were posted up the stuff you were talking about in the post. Had some grammatical errors but overall nicely written.
I was captivated with your choice of the new season of THE OFFICE, since I am a big fan of the television series as well. I was intrigued with many of the changes made in the new series that you listed. But some parts of the article lacked certain details pertaining to the examples you exemplified. Although I was able to understand some of the grammatical errors made, a couple more revisions of your article could have prevented this. The visuals that were presented in your piece were ideal in introducing the new characters. Overall, the background information and episode description was well written.
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The premier summary gave us a lot of information about the show. Good explanation about all the changes made in the new season,gave us a heads up before we watch it. The pictures used were good because there were posted up the stuff you were talking about in the post. Had some grammatical errors but overall nicely written.
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